Sunday, December 19, 2004


marta and I in a moment of eloquence

This is your eloquent and "meaningful contribution to society?" My great...great grandfather would be rolling over and doing somersaults if he could see this. Straighten up at once, young man! (Also, fyi, it should be "Marta and me...").

---Benjamin A. Trustman XXIV
I'll concede that we were in no way helping society. But "Marta and me"? I don't think so. Try fleshing out the sentence: "Marta and I give you the finger in a moment of eloquence." It works. (Though I admit you could also do it "This is a picture of Marta and me in a moment of eloquence."
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